a creative piece. Although i like the interactivity, i would suggest adding more, such as the choice of your own name.
Over all though, looks great
...But there's voice acting.
Beside from the obvious, already pointed out lack of colour, for a 2nd its excellent :]! I do however feel that ng is a place not just to upload any work, so im critiquing it just like i would a normal animation
Some great talent is evident, good use of panning for example, and a great story line, and background knowledge (most people would just say the plane ran out of fuel or something). What im saying is that with enough practice, and definatly alot of patients you could defiantly make truly great animations
I'll just respond to this one for all the other ones as well. Thanks for the suggestions, I'll definitely be adding color next time. And working on my drawing is always important, but it's good to know people care enough to give helpful suggestions.
my hair stood up
This is one of the few animations made on flash that actually makes all my hair stand up. Love it!
this is quite a good animation and I love the song. Maybe a bit more work on the guitar, for example at the start where the electric kicks in theres a point where you can hear its not playing as fast as the guy. Overall though, it is quite amazing
Love it :)
i see you took my advice with the ending, imo, turne out gr8. Alot of atention to detail in it, things people never knowtice like: the stars, rain, detailed water ect... Overall, with this qulity work for your first submistion, you'll soon be up their getting top all times m8 :P
cheers man! yeah in the end making it a dream was actually the easy option. haha maybe, onto the next project.......
5/5 for the awesome flash!!!
AWESOME!!! just needs some more length!
great graphics, nice use of sound effects and a little humourus. A bit short, but i guess something like this cant be made too long, and therefor i suggest you start making animations with a longer story line 2 fully showcase your drawing abilitys.
Thanks a lot! I'm working on stuff at the moment but thanks again!
I like i, mabye a bit longer. My suggestion wuld be if you keep making bad tv pitches add them all to one project with a bit of linking to them, like a sort of collab. Keep it up :)
all i got to say is great work!
some ideas: buying a expencive wepon and getting head shot without even getting the chanse to fire one round.
shooting someone head on with something like ak 47 and getting head shot by a basic pistol
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