creatvie
a creative piece. Although i like the interactivity, i would suggest adding more, such as the choice of your own name.
Over all though, looks great
creatvie
a creative piece. Although i like the interactivity, i would suggest adding more, such as the choice of your own name.
Over all though, looks great
...But there's voice acting.
well..
Beside from the obvious, already pointed out lack of colour, for a 2nd its excellent :]! I do however feel that ng is a place not just to upload any work, so im critiquing it just like i would a normal animation
Some great talent is evident, good use of panning for example, and a great story line, and background knowledge (most people would just say the plane ran out of fuel or something). What im saying is that with enough practice, and definatly alot of patients you could defiantly make truly great animations
I'll just respond to this one for all the other ones as well. Thanks for the suggestions, I'll definitely be adding color next time. And working on my drawing is always important, but it's good to know people care enough to give helpful suggestions.
Nice
Excelent work, especially for our first project!
Thanks
Age 30, Male
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